I really like the 5 star ratings on the back of the white t-shirt, as it leaves the audience wondering whether it is actually printed onto the top or if it has been added after. I feel that if you resized the band name text, and placed it in the centre of the back of the grey t-shirt it would look very good - and would match the ratings. I think the band logo would also suit the advert more if it were shrunk and dragged down to be more central in the space between the album title and the extra info. The creases in the corner of the photography make the advert look unprofessional, but I think once removed it would look very authentic. Good advert.
I really like the 5 star ratings on the back of the white t-shirt, as it leaves the audience wondering whether it is actually printed onto the top or if it has been added after. I feel that if you resized the band name text, and placed it in the centre of the back of the grey t-shirt it would look very good - and would match the ratings. I think the band logo would also suit the advert more if it were shrunk and dragged down to be more central in the space between the album title and the extra info. The creases in the corner of the photography make the advert look unprofessional, but I think once removed it would look very authentic. Good advert.
i agree with millie i think the star ratings on the back of the t shirt looks really good, and as if it is on the back of the t-shirt, however i do not really like the font used, also good photography, its focused and isn't blurry.
I like this advert as it has a minimalist feel to it (with a few tweaks) and matches you digipak well, however there are a few tweaks I would suggest: -Removing the creases in the top corners of the poster/advert -Re positioning the band name
This is a good advert as it links back to the digipak and there is a minimalist feel to it. I think that the text near the bottom could be moved around more as it doesn't fit with the organised look of the rest of the advert
I like the information you have chosen to include as I feel it informs the audience but there is not too much, which adds simplicity. I also like the placing of the band logo as I feel this is eye-catching and links to both the band and the album well. I also like how you have chosen to include ratings as this is a way to convince an audience that the album is good. I feel an improvement would be to ensure the photo used is a bit lighter and there is not the creases in the corners.
an improvement you could make would be that the background is a bit too glum. However, I .like the way you have created a landscape advert and done something different. The font goes well with the picture and bands logo and the text is neatly placed and symmetrical. The ratings over the artists back works well and looks professional but i'm not sure on the placement of the bands name, it could be moved over the artist on the right better. I feel you have created an authentic looking product.
an improvement you could make would be that the background is a bit too glum. However, I .like the way you have created a landscape advert and done something different. The font goes well with the picture and bands logo and the text is neatly placed and symmetrical. The ratings over the artists back works well and looks professional but i'm not sure on the placement of the bands name, it could be moved over the artist on the right better. I feel you have created an authentic looking product.
I really like the 5 star ratings on the back of the white t-shirt, as it leaves the audience wondering whether it is actually printed onto the top or if it has been added after. I feel that if you resized the band name text, and placed it in the centre of the back of the grey t-shirt it would look very good - and would match the ratings. I think the band logo would also suit the advert more if it were shrunk and dragged down to be more central in the space between the album title and the extra info. The creases in the corner of the photography make the advert look unprofessional, but I think once removed it would look very authentic. Good advert.
ReplyDeleteI really like the 5 star ratings on the back of the white t-shirt, as it leaves the audience wondering whether it is actually printed onto the top or if it has been added after. I feel that if you resized the band name text, and placed it in the centre of the back of the grey t-shirt it would look very good - and would match the ratings. I think the band logo would also suit the advert more if it were shrunk and dragged down to be more central in the space between the album title and the extra info. The creases in the corner of the photography make the advert look unprofessional, but I think once removed it would look very authentic. Good advert.
ReplyDeletei agree with millie i think the star ratings on the back of the t shirt looks really good, and as if it is on the back of the t-shirt, however i do not really like the font used, also good photography, its focused and isn't blurry.
ReplyDeleteI like this advert as it has a minimalist feel to it (with a few tweaks) and matches you digipak well, however there are a few tweaks I would suggest:
ReplyDelete-Removing the creases in the top corners of the poster/advert
-Re positioning the band name
This is a good advert as it links back to the digipak and there is a minimalist feel to it. I think that the text near the bottom could be moved around more as it doesn't fit with the organised look of the rest of the advert
ReplyDeleteI like the information you have chosen to include as I feel it informs the audience but there is not too much, which adds simplicity. I also like the placing of the band logo as I feel this is eye-catching and links to both the band and the album well. I also like how you have chosen to include ratings as this is a way to convince an audience that the album is good. I feel an improvement would be to ensure the photo used is a bit lighter and there is not the creases in the corners.
ReplyDeletean improvement you could make would be that the background is a bit too glum. However, I .like the way you have created a landscape advert and done something different. The font goes well with the picture and bands logo and the text is neatly placed and symmetrical. The ratings over the artists back works well and looks professional but i'm not sure on the placement of the bands name, it could be moved over the artist on the right better. I feel you have created an authentic looking product.
ReplyDeletean improvement you could make would be that the background is a bit too glum. However, I .like the way you have created a landscape advert and done something different. The font goes well with the picture and bands logo and the text is neatly placed and symmetrical. The ratings over the artists back works well and looks professional but i'm not sure on the placement of the bands name, it could be moved over the artist on the right better. I feel you have created an authentic looking product.
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