Changes to the Advert

After reviewing the comments people had made on my advert, I found that there were some things I could change to make it more appealing to an audience.


This was my draft advert, there was one thing that stood out in the comments for improvements, this was in the top left and right corners the background I used was creased,I ended up retaking this photo as I tried editing it and it didn't look professional.

Another part I changed was the image on he front, as I was informed it would look better if I used the same image on the cover of my digipak and on the advert, this meant that I could use the image I first used on my advert on and put it on the back of my digipak.

Whilst looking at the comments and over peoples work I thought that on mine the band logo looked too big compared with what other people had used, I decided to shrink this image so that it did not take any focus away from the image and text.

I made the decision to re-position all the the text on this as I felt it was in the working place, also it did not match my digipak, I also changed the size of the text so that it would stand out more.

After altering my advert from looking at the comments I got, I believe the changes I have made have improved my work.

Changes to Digipak

After reviewing the comments people had left on my digipak, I found that there were many places I could improve this to make it more appealing to an audience.

The first change I made as where the text was placed on the font cover, as in my draft it did not look professional, it does not fit well with the image. After looking at actual bands album covers I found that having the text over laying the image of the band looks professional. I also changed the name of the album as I did not like it. On the spine of the digipak I added the name of the album as this is what is on the spine for professional digipaks also I used a catalogue number as then it looks like an actual digipak. Also the song list on the back cover I moved due to me having to change the image I wanted the text to stand out.

The next change I made was the image on the back cover. I changed this because the draft image did not match the feel of the digipak and looked out of place with the rest of it. The image on the final piece was the image from my draft advert that I changed, I felt that having a back cover that matched the front looked professional.

Also I changed the inside right cover as, although I liked having the band logo there, I felt that having a better image there would look more professional. I first changed it to an image of an A I wrote using a light on a black background, after getting feedback on this I felt that changing it would be a good idea. I then took a screenshot of the opening scene to our finished music video as this way they would link very well together.

On my first draft of my digipak I had a black layer on the inside left panel, after getting feedback from this I decided that it was too plain so I tried to find an image that would it well there. I chose the image I had previously used on the inside right panel, this fit well in that spot. However, due to this panel having a slit in it for the in-slip to go in, it distorted the image slightly. I decided to change this for my final piece 

Feedback Received from Draft Digiak - Michael

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